News, Views and Writing that Love Scene

Another week has gone and I woke up this morning thinking, ‘wow where did the time go?’ It’s been a hectic week writing wise. On Monday I got an email on a manuscript I submitted early this year and was asked to do revisions and resubmit. So I pushed back on a WIP I was working on for submission to Harlequin at the end of August.

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I’ve written about this manuscript I was asked to do revisions on before. My publisher (Decadent Publishing) had started a series, Black Hills Wolves, and I’ve read some of the books and love one of the co-creators behind the series, Rebecca Royce’s books, so I was more than intrigued. I queried about the series and then submitted a synopsis. The novels are short reads and I’ve always wanted to see if I could write a novella. During that time there was a lot of back and forth working through plot ideas and I’ve never had that with an editor before. It was amazing how easy, open and friendly; Laura Garland was as we went through this process. I also got guidelines from Rebecca and Heather Long, who’s also the co-creator of this multi-author series.

I had my Rupunzel story to complete while I was doing this, so I figured since I had a worked out synopsis writing would be fast. And yeah it was *smile*

A Wolf’s Choice was just one of those stories that flowed, and I think it had a lot to do with the level of investment and interest I had in the characters. I’ve worked from synopses before, even though I love the ‘discovery’ as I write. And I’ve learned to go with my gut. Some stories will always require a bit of more in-depth planning than others. Instead of viewing an outline and a synopsis as stifling, I rather see it as a road map, along the way side roads will probably be taken and a couple of hours spent admiring the view, but I know where I’m heading.

That’s what A Wolf’s Choice felt like writing. I knew where I was heading, I knew who my characters were and I knew what they were going to find at the end (not just a HEA *wink*).

A Wolf’s Choice is also my first foray into writing a love scene (I talked about it on my Facebook Page:http://bit.ly/1defI54 ). I did what every author does when confronted with something they’ve never written before, I went on the internet, researched, did silly status updates where I ‘voiced’ my anxiety but still tried to do it in a non-I’m-a-dunce way.

The best advice I got from the inter-webs was write what you’re comfortable with. Use words that doesn’t make you cringe and words your characters would definitely use, that fits with their personality. And most importantly be true to the story.

So I took the pressure off and decided to chuck out the guidelines for the series (which had a distinct heat level) and just write what the characters and story demanded of me. And the scene became effortless. In fact I think I surprised myself, which really shouldn’t have been such a surprise at all.

My bookshelf consists of such a variety of genres and heat levels that I should’ve known I wouldn’t have a problem writing a love scene. I think where the pressure or even fear comes in, was with what people who knew me would think. Even at thirty-two you can’t help but still care. I’m fairly open about my faith and what I believe; it’s a lifestyle to me. Every day, all day *smile* so how do you reconcile writing a love scene (not a sex scene mind you) with the conservative world of Christianity? (Of course you also have to ask how do you reconcile werewolves, but that’s a story for another blog post *smile*).

Two of my favorite Christian authors are Francine Rivers and Frank Peretti, two writers who write a distinct spiritual message in their stories, but don’t sacrifice the story or characters for preachy writing. It astounded me to learn at first that Francine Rivers was a romance writer, and then I went, “No wait that actually makes sense, since she writes romance in her books.” There’s a love story between a man and a woman, but also between them and God. Made perfect sense. Frank Peretti on the other end, writes nail biting suspense slash horror filled blockbusters you just want to ask Hollywood to make some big feature film out of so you can be scared witless again *laughs* They are open about human sexuality. They do not draw a veil over it as if it didn’t exist. They are honest in their writing. And that’s what I love about these two authors. They don’t conform to what a Christian book is ‘supposed’ to be, but they write the story that’s in their hearts to write and stay true to the characters.

I took a page from them and went for it. In the end I was pleasantly surprised. There are really a lot of varied emotions that goes on in that love scene and it’s vital to the plot of the story. A Wolf’s Choice couldn’t have happened without it. I’m glad I didn’t shy away from writing it. It’s become one of my favorite scenes in the novella. I’m hoping to complete the revisions and hit send soon, and God willing, come back with good news *smile*

Thanks for being on the writing journey with me xoxo

#HappyWriting.

 

 

 

Review of Vampire Origins: The Ichorous Project by Riley Banks.

Vampire Origins

The Vampire Origins: The Ichorous Project is the first, Young Adult Paranormal, book in its series, Vampire Origins.

The first book centers on the origins of the first of five Vampire tribes the Strigoi, with Vladimir (Vlad) as it`s ‘founding father’. The Author blends historical fact with fiction as she weaves a fast paced story filled with characters.
Vlad aka Vladimir the Impaler slaughtered 30,000 in one night in Jerusalem and impaled 100,000 more in Romania in the 1400s , setting him up as a ruthless killer Vampire. Vlad in present day discovers a way to enslave humans and rule the world. But there`s one thing that could end his plan – a Strigoi human and Vlad would stop at nothing to achieve his goal or rather finish his project.
The main girl Scarlett Fraser has no idea she was that Strigoi when her father moved their family again, this time to Romania to renovate an old castle that was ground zero for Vlad’s Ichorous Project and his plan for world domination.
The book starts off with a bang, right in the middle of Russian revolutionist history, with a not so dead prince Alexei (Alex) and princess Anastasia (Anna) Romanov, and their journey to Vampiredom. It`s here that I got really excited being a history major myself and growing up with movies with conspiracy theories about princess Anastasia.
The Author takes us back to 1915-1925 introducing us to Alex and Anna before they are turned Vampire by Vlad. We fall in love with their story of survival, as their mother hides them from the Bolsheviks and them later on being discovered by a servant Ivan who wasn`t at the castle when it was attacked. We receive this information from Alex`s point of view in a flashback, who`s about to ask, Kristiina, Ivan`s daughter to marry him, but Vlad steps in, resulting in Kristiina`s death and them becoming Vampires.
As the Frasers get introduce into the story from here on, you get sucked into their family dramas of sibling bickery as well as true family tragedy, in the form of their mother dying right after the birth of the youngest sister, Ruby. Scarlett`s the one who feels it the most. She blames her little sister for her death.
Scarlett`s a spitfire tomboy who grew up with three brothers- they`re quadruplets. Scarlett`s struggle makes her surly and in compassionate at times, but she still obeys her father to a certain extent and looks after her sister.
But if you thought the book revolves just around Scarlett, you are mistaken. The other characters also have prominence. And that`s why I thank the Author for the character list at the beginning of the book. It`s a good reference point, though it wasn`t tough for me to sort them out, I know that some could find it confusing.
The first hundred pages flew by for me. I was excited and exhilarated at how the normal was going to meet the paranormal. I`ve already developed a crush on Alex and was already predicting his role in Scarlett`s life. Alas it was not the role I wanted. It was clear that the Author decidedly moved away from the typical ‘old vampire falls for the seventeen year old girl’. And in my book that`s okay.
The Author also explores the relationship between Vampires and Werewolves, playing on the age old animosity between the two. In this book Werewolves are the slaves to Vampires, the ‘bottom of the food chain’. But there are those who are thought of as even less, shape-shifters and it is with a shape-shifter, Caleb that Scarlett falls in love with. Though it`s not an epic love, it is a teenage one with all the drama and unexpected break-ups that goes along with it.
Of course Vlad has a nemesis in the form of his wife`s nephew, Lachlan. And Lachlan, besides making a play for Scarlett and inevitably finding out the secret to Vlad`s demise, play`s the malevolent ‘bad boy’ who has no problem killing to get his way. He manipulates everyone around him, using dark magic and his Vampire abilities. Being a Cambion, he`s a pureblood Vampire with all the arrogance of one.
What I did want more though was Vlad`s story. From the book`s blurb you expect at least an introduction to Vlad early on, but it doesn`t come until later in the book and by then you`ve forgotten that the story is actually about Vlad, Vampire Origins and The Ichorous Project, because you`ve become so invested in everyone else`s story.
The story definitely has twists and turns, but because it`s a third-person narrative, it doesn`t offer the punch the Author intended. There are interesting moments like when the Author takes liberties with famous celebrities.
By the end of the book I, however, was left…bereft. I wanted more details of the Ichorous Project. I wanted to know Vlad`s origin story. How did he come into existence? And why is it so important for him to start the project in the first place? With things like blood banks, the whole concept didn`t jell for me. I needed an explanation on why Vlad the Impaler would spend time doing something like this.
Second, Scarlett stands in the way of him finishing the project. Never in the book does it get revealed how she would achieve this. Does it have something to do with her blood? Or just the fact that her hand would hold the tool to kill him? I would have liked to be in on that secret.
And lastly, Vampire Origins set out to do something few supernatural/paranormal books have done, explain the origins of Vampires, something I applaud. It`s ambitious in that endeavor, still I don`t know where the Strigoi come from. There are five tribes (The Cambion, The Bretonnian, The Strix, The Nosferatu, and The Strigoi) , each has their description, but none of them a true origin like some popular fiction has attempted to do e.g. True Blood with its Biblical claims.
There were definite parts that I loved, but then there were also parts that I didn`t. The ending was a bit abrupt and left too many things hanging or rather too many characters hanging. The background of Russian history interwoven in Alex and Anna`s story was superb, I would like to read more about either of them. And that`s the other concern, I`m more interested in, what I assumed to be, the back stories of the book than the main characters.
And therefore because of this I give Vampire Origins: The Ichorous Project a 3 out of 5. There will definitely be those who would enjoy the fast paced and ambitious attempt at explaining Vampire origins.